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What do you hate the most that authors do in the first chapters of their books?
And on the other side, what is the best way to hook your interest and make you keep reading?
Honest, long winded and unique answers are appreciated.
And on the other side, what is the best way to hook your interest and make you keep reading?
Honest, long winded and unique answers are appreciated.
Chesterton Quote
“we come to a change in artistic structure. The thing is no longer a string of incidents; it is a cycle of incidents. It returns upon itself; it has recurrent melody and poetic justice; it has artistic constancy and artistic revenge. It preserves the unities; even to some extent it preserves the unities of time and place. The story circles round two or three symbolic places; it does not go straggling irregularly all over England like one of Mr. Pickwick’s coaches. People go from one place to another place; but not from one place to another place on the road to everywhere else. If there is ultimately any crisis or serious subject-m
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Devious Journal Entry
Good to know I'm not the only one who thought the designs had glaring flaws, because I thought I was in the Twilight Zone.
I think a lot of fans are missing the point, and can't look passed the quick redesigns made for an example. The originals are far from perfect.
It's NOT a style if you're only settling for it because you can't do better if you tried, and too many little choices in the design show she is inexperienced and unable to achieve a certain standard.
Designs are visual. If you have to explain them, they have failed.
The amount of excuses people make to defend something just because it's popular is insane.
Out of Curiosity
What story do you think has the best beginning?
What story do you think has the best end?
What story do you think has the best mystery?
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also, immediately introducing an annoying girl will tick me off anywhere in the story xD